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The Alliance: A Registry Novel

The Alliance Book Cover The Alliance
The Registry, Book 3
Shannon Stoker
Fiction
William Morrow Paperbacks
2014-09-02
448

In this deadly endgame, the final move is hers . . . In America, the Registry weds girls to the highest bidder and raises boys for its army. Mia Morrissey escaped to make her life her own, and now that she has, she will risk everything so that everyone can be free. Going undercover as part of a diplomatic mission, Mia returns to America. But life there is more dangerous than ever as the walls grow taller, and the forgotten country faces its most ruthless leader yet, Grant Marsden . . . a shadow from Mia's past. With the help of Andrew, Carter, and other members of the subversive group Affinity, she embarks on a perilous journey to defeat Grant, bring down the government, and destroy the Registry once and for all. But when a terrible betrayal exposes the operation, Mia discovers that her enemies have used her—and so have her friends. Alone and frightened, she's uncertain of whom to trust—or whether the mission is worth the sacrifice. With the fate of her friends and the future of her country on the line, Mia knows that her next step may be the last for her . . . and America.

 

Review:

I admit that I was a little reticent to continue “The Registry” series, by Shannon Stoker, but the premise was promising enough to get me to give “The Alliance” a try, and I’m glad a did.

While the writing still lacks some polish and over-use of certain words (said being an example), the author showed a great deal of growth in how she handles character interaction and personal thoughts.  The backstories sprinkled throughout made the characters feel less like caricatures and more like humans.  I genuinely began to care about most of them, even the less than likable ones from the previous “Registry” novels.

I loved the beginning of each chapter including the history of how the society came to be using accounts from diaries of the period.  It provided answers to questions that had been nagging me from the beginning, and the explanations made perfect sense in the context of the story.  The ending was also plausible and satisfying.

I’m very impressed with Stoker’s growth and look forward to seeing what else she publishes.

 

Content Warning:

Language, Violence, Sexual Situations

Walt Before Mickey: Disney’s Early Years 1919-1928

Walt Before Mickey Book Cover Walt Before Mickey
Timothy S. Susanin
Biography & Autobiography
2014-09-01
384

The untold story of ten critical, formative years in the great producer's life

 

Review:

This review is of a complimentary copy provided through Netgalley in exchange for an honest review.

“Walt Before Mickey” by Timothy S. Susanin is one of the, if not the, most exhaustive accounts of Disney’s early years that can be found.  The research is thorough, and it shows.

I have mixed feelings on “Walt Before Mickey”.  As a historian, and a huge Disney nerd, the facts presented are a treasure trove.  Almost all of the information is rare, the sources are solid and well-documented, and it brings a feeling of closeness to Disney himself.

On the other hand, there is almost too much information.  Every single person he met has a painstaking account of their looks and history.  Not that those things are not important, but it slows it down and takes away from what is important.  More than once I found my mind wandering during these descriptions, and it really is a shame that it mars what is otherwise an exceptional account of a great man.

I can highly recommend “Walt Before Mickey” to historians or those with an intense interest in Disney himself, but would recommend those with a casual interest to give this one a pass.

The Bully Order

The Bully of Order Book Cover The Bully of Order
Brian Hart
Fiction
Harper
2014-09-02
400

Washington Territory, 1886 Jacob and Nell Ellstrom step from ship to shore and are struck dumb by the sight of their new home—the Harbor, a ragged township of mud streets and windowless shacks. In the years to come this will be known as one of the busiest and most dangerous ports in the world, and with Jacob's station as the only town physician, prosperity and respect soon rain down on the Ellstroms. Then their son, Duncan, is born, and these are grand days, busy and full of growth. But when a new physician arrives, Jacob is revealed as an impostor, a fraud, and he flees, leaving his wife and son to fend for themselves. Years later, on a fated Fourth of July picnic, Duncan Ellstrom falls in love. Her name is Teresa Boyerton, and her father owns the largest sawmill in the Harbor. Their relationship is forbidden by class and by circumstance, because without Jacob there to guide him, Duncan has gone to work for Hank Bellhouse, the local crime boss. Now, if Duncan wants to be with Teresa, he must face not only his past, but the realities of a dark and violent world and his place within it. Told from various points of view, Brian Hart's novel follows the evolution of the Harbor from a mudstamp outpost to a city that rivals the promise of San Francisco. The Bully of Order is a meditation on progress, love, and identity; a spellbinding novel of fate and redemption—told with a muscular lyricism and filled with a cast of characters Shakespearean in scope—where everyone is as much at the mercy of the weather as they are of the times.

 

Review:

This review is of a complimentary copy provided by Harper through the Goodreads First Reads program in exchange for an honest review.

“The Bully Order” by Brian Hart is an unapologetic novel set on the coast of Washington State in the early 19oo’s.  It is gritty and doesn’t shy away from just how brutal and miserable things were during that time in that area.

I really wanted to like this novel.  The history is sound and a refreshing take on an era that is all too often romanticized.  A few of the characters were engaging and made me want to know more about them.  Unfortunately, those were the only redeeming qualities I found.

The beginning of the book is slow and filled with words that make it seem as though the writer went crazy with a thesaurus.  It really bogs the flow down and makes it near impossible to get sucked into what may otherwise be a good story.  The flips between points of view were enough to make me seasick.  I stuck with it in the vain hope that it would get better, but the flaws pulled me too far out to ever really settle into the story.

 

Content Warning:

Language, Violence, Sexual Situations, Rape

Love and Other Unknown Variables

Love and Other Unknown Variables Book Cover Love and Other Unknown Variables
Shannon Alexander
Juvenile Fiction
Entangled: Teen
2014-10-07
352

Charlie Hanson has a clear vision of his future. A senior at Brighton School of Mathematics and Science, he knows he’ll graduate, go to MIT, and inevitably discover solutions to the universe’s greatest unanswerable problems. He’s that smart. But Charlie’s future blurs the moment he reaches out to touch the tattoo on a beautiful girl’s neck. The future has never seemed very kind to Charlotte Finch, so she’s counting on the present. She’s not impressed by the strange boy pawing at her—until she learns he’s a student at Brighton where her sister has just taken a job as the English teacher. With her encouragement, Charlie orchestrates the most effective prank campaign in Brighton history. But, in doing so, he puts his own future in jeopardy. By the time he learns she's ill—and that the pranks were a way to distract Ms. Finch from Charlotte’s illness—Charlotte’s gravitational pull is too great to overcome. Soon he must choose between the familiar formulas he’s always relied on or the girl he’s falling for (at far more than 32 feet per second).

 

Review:

This is a review of an ARC provided through Netgalley by Entangled Press in exchange for an honest review.

I don’t even know where to begin with how much I love “Love and Other Unknown Variables.”  Love may not be a strong enough word.  There are so many things about it that make it a breath of fresh air in the Young Adult genre.

Shannon Lee Alexander’s writing seems effortless and flows in a way that pulls you in quickly and keeps you engaged, making it nearly impossible to put it down.  The characters are all intriguing and the dialogue is realistic for teenagers, something not always present, which adds to the relatibility of the characters to the target audience.

I was thrilled to find a coming-of-age romance narrated with such tenderness by a male narrator.  Charlie is flawed but likable, and grows in a way that is inspiring.  It was especially wonderful to see how siblings can grow together and become friends as they age, as well as how those we think we know can be so much more than we give them credit for.

I can’t say much else without spoiling the book, but the themes of difficult choices and thinking outside of the lines, both literally and metaphorically in this case, are explored with an excellent mix of humor and gravity.

I feel privileged for the opportunity to be one of the first to read “Love and Other Unknown Variables.”  My honest opinion is that the book, as well as Shannon Lee Alexander, will become a force to be reckoned with in the world of Young Adult literature, something which is well-deserved.

 

Content Warning:

Language, Sexual Situations

Dataclysm

Dataclysm Book Cover Dataclysm
Christian Rudder
Computers
Crown Pub
2014-09-09
304

An irreverent analysis of what our online lives reveal about who we really are draws on information from major online sources, from Twitter and Facebook to Reddit and OkCupid, to explain how the science of human behavior is dramatically evolving. 125,000 first printing.

 

Review:

The copy I am reviewing was received through Netgalley from Crown publishing in exchange for an honest review.

In “Dataclysm”, Christian Rudder embarks on the mission to bring Big Data to the masses. Big History and Big Economics are popular today, and I think this book is going to achieve the mission with great success.

Math is not known for being embraced by many, so Rudder’s work was cut out for him.  His subject choices and examples were well-chosen and interesting, and concepts are explained in a way not “dumbed down” too much, but easily understood by anyone wishing to put the effort into learning about them.  At a few points it became a bit too dense with information, and that is why I give the book four stars instead of five.  I wish four and a half were an option, because while it keeps it from having the ability to capture the attention of any reader who may pick it up, I believe that the author is respecting those who want to truly gain knowledge, thereby making the density not a necessarily bad thing.

The facts and writing were both funny and horrifying.  One minute I would be laughing at the idea that Belle and Sebastian are the whitest band in America, and the next I was completely uncomfortable with the racism that is inherent in the population as a whole.  It’s easy to say “I am not racist”, but quite different when the patterns of a large group are put on display and analyzed and you recognize your own behaviors in there.  It’s food for thought, and something most of us are not even conscious that occurs, so the hope that we can now see it on display and work to make changes in our thoughts is a very real one.

The most unsettling question raised is whether or not the social gains are worth the privacy we are sacrificing.  Since it’s a new field, it’s up to the people to set standards, so learning about it is more than educational or entertaining.  Without knowing what is going on, we cannot object or consciously aid in what it’s used for.

Also, please be sure to read the author’s notes at the end.  He does an excellent job of explaining where and how he got the data, as well as the approaches and controls he used in his research.  It’s fascinating and adds the legitimacy numbers often require.

If you enjoy facts, data, charts and graphs (the ones in “Dataclysm” are excellent), or are inquisitive in any way I recommend you give this a try.  The first couple of chapters may feel a bit overwhelming, but eventually the read becomes easier, and it is well worth the time.

 

Content Warning:

This isn’t a book for kids, nor is it marketed as such, though teenagers may enjoy it.  There are some words some may find objectionable, and the usage of data from a dating site does make sex a topic that frequently comes up.

 

Graduation Day

Graduation Day Book Cover Graduation Day
The Testing, Book 3
Joelle Charbonneau
Juvenile Fiction
Houghton Mifflin Harcourt
2014
304

In book three of The Testing series, the United Commonwealth wants to eliminate the rebel alliance fighting to destroy The Testing for good, and though Cia is ready to lead the charge, will her lethal classmates follow her into battle? 75,000 first printing.

 

Review:

I absolutely loved “The Testing”, and while a bit disappointed in “Independent Study”, I still enjoyed it.  I wish I had stopped before I read “Graduation Day”.

The one redeeming factor of “Graduation Day” is the action, so I will begin there.  The action sequences were intense and real page turners. Unfortunately, there was not enough of it.

It all seems like the author is trying too hard to put in plot twists.  Some of it came nowhere and made no sense.  Characters made decisions not in line with what had been established about them previously, and at some point Cia became just as cold and uncaring as those she was trying to overthrow.  The ending made her seem like she cared about no one but a cause- the same way of thinking that created the testing in the first place.

I wanted to love this book, or to even just “like” it.  Neither of those are possible. There are barely even any resolutions to the multitude of problems in their society. It was enough of a letdown to make me regret reading past the first book.

 

Content Warning:

Language, Violence

Into the Still Blue

Into the Still Blue Book Cover Into the Still Blue
Under the Never Sky, Book 3
Veronica Rossi
Juvenile Fiction
HarperCollins
2014-01-28
400

The race for survival comes to a thrilling close in the earth-shattering conclusion to Veronica Rossi's New York Times bestselling Under the Never Sky trilogy. Their love and their leadership have been tested. Now it's time for Perry and Aria to unite the Dwellers and the Outsiders in one last desperate attempt to find the fabled Still Blue and bring balance to their world. Perfect for fans of the Hunger Games and Divergent series, Veronica Rossi's trilogy has been called "inspired, offbeat, and mesmerizing" (Kirkus Reviews, starred review) and "incredibly original" (Seventeen.com). Brimming with romance and danger and building to a climax that will leave you breathless, Into the Still Blue brings this "masterpiece" trilogy to an unforgettable close (Examiner.com).

 

Review:

With the “Under the Never Sky” series being one of my favorite guilty pleasures, I could not wait to get my hands on “Into the Still Blue”.  Aria, Perry, Roar, Cinder and Company were in a bad situation the last time I saw them, and I was glad to know the action picked up immediately from where the previous book ended.

Before I go any further, I need to say that I did enjoy the book.  It was a fast and fun read, and I do not regret reading it.  The characters are fun, the plot still makes no sense but for some reason I did not care, and I am a total Perry and Aria shipper.

With that out-of-the-way, I was still irritated to no end by the sheer predictability of the book.  It feels as though not one single curveball was thrown, and I could have spared myself the few hours it took me to read it by just knowing everything would happen exactly as I thought it would, with one exception, and that is that the author left a major plotline unresolved.  In fact, it goes completely unmentioned.  It is as if it never happened, and that is a pet peeve of mine.

I enjoyed it, but it felt way too phoned in to count as a satisfying conclusion to an otherwise fun story.

 

Content Warning:

Language, Violence, Sexual Situations

 

The Collection

The Collection: A Registry Novel Book Cover The Collection: A Registry Novel
The Registry, Book 2
Shannon Stoker
Young Adult Fiction
William Morrow Paperbacks
Paperback
368

How far would you go to control your own destiny?

Mia Morrissey has escaped: from America, from the Registry, from the role she was raised to play—a perfect bride auctioned to the highest bidder. She's enemy number one to the world's largest power, and there's no turning back now.

 

Review:

“The Collection” picks up immediately from where “The Registry” ended, with Mia in the company of Riley and Andrew and Carter being held captive.  Riley is my favorite character in the series up to this point, and I hope we get to see more.

My feelings on “The Collection” are very mixed.  The plot is very imaginative, and it brings up many talking points, including women’s rights, war, etc.  It is clean enough for middle readers without being too juvenile for the older young adult crowd.  Those points alone are worth the given three stars.

Unfortunately, character development is sparse, and the writing contains way too many “he said, she said, they saids”.  I feel like if “said” were to be removed entirely, being replaced with more descriptive words, it would have been a much more pleasant read.  It would have been wonderful to know more about the internal conflicts faced by each character.  Instead, it is left somewhat dry and unexplored.

All said, I am still going to give the third installment of the series a read, because the plot has me hooked enough to want to know how it ends.

 

Content Warning:

Violence, Sexual Situations, Unwilling Drug Use

 

All We Had

All We Had: A Novel Book Cover All We Had: A Novel
Annie Weatherwax
Adult Fiction
Scribner
August 5, 2014
Hardcover
272

For thirteen-year-old Ruthie Carmichael and her mother, Rita, life has never been stable. The only sure thing is their love for each other. Though Rita works more than one job, the pair teeters on the edge of poverty. When their landlord kicks them out, Rita resorts to her movie-star looks and produces carpet-installer Phil, "an instant boyfriend," who takes them in.

Before long, Ruthie convinces her mother to leave and in their battered Ford Escort, they head East in search of a better life. When money runs out and their car breaks down, they find themselves stranded in a small town called Fat River where their luck finally takes a turn. Rita lands a steady job waitressing at Tiny’s, the local diner. With enough money to pay their bills, they rent a house and Fat River becomes the first place they call home.

 

Review:

I received this book for free from Scribner through the Goodreads First Reads program in exchange for an honest review.

“Every character is a protagonist in their own story” is a quote I once heard (apologies, but for the life of me I can’t find the person who actually said it), and on my own attempts at writing, I have always tried to keep it in mind.

“All We Had” is hands-down the greatest example of this concept in action I have ever read.  The heart of the story is Ruthie and her young mother, but every single character has a deep and rich history that is revealed through remarkably little prose.  I found myself wondering what happened to them all after the last page, and I imagine I will do so for quite some time.

This book is a slice-of-life story that is a very easy read about subject matter that is not easy to read about.  Ruthie shares it all with stark realism, zero nostalgia, and brutal honesty.  There are no feelings of self-pity or self-congratulation.  It is what it is, and that is how the story is told.  As such, it feels raw and honest, ultimately leaving an uneasy feeling in the readers about all of the Ruthies that live within our world.

I don’t want to spoil anything, because in this case the journey is the story, so even a summary feels as though it would give away too much.  I can say that it’s on the list of books I will be giving all of the readers in my life this holiday season.  Annie Weatherwax is a wonderful storyteller, and I look forward to many more novels from her.

Five stars.  I wish I could give more.

Content Warning:

“All We Had” is not actually a young adult book, but I feel like it is an excellent choice for more advanced and mature readers.  There is strong language, violence, sexual situations, rape, and animal death, but none of it is gratuitous or presented too graphically.  In my opinion, the contemporary social issues raised are important and present many good talking points.

The Scorch Trials

The Scorch Trials Book Cover The Scorch Trials
The Maze Runner, Book 2
James Dashner
Juvenile Fiction
Random House LLC
2011
361

After surviving horrific conditions in the Maze, Thomas is entrapped, along with nineteen other boys, in an experiment designed to observe their responses and gather data believed to be essential for the survival of the human race.

 

Review:

Once again, there is a second in a series book that I found more enjoyable than the original, though there was more character development and plot in the first, making “The Maze Runner” a better novel all around.  The action is where the appeal is in this one, with “The Scorch Trials” picks up immediately where “The Maze Runner” ended, with the Gladers once again being thrust into a situation they do not understand and have no chance to stop and ponder.

“The Scorch Trials” has action that literally does not stop.  No time is left to think, and the panic felt by the characters becomes very real.  The violence is raised to a higher level than in “The Maze Runner”, so those with weak stomachs should most likely stay away.  In fact, it is taken to a high enough level that the target age group seems to be older.  Gruesome is a good word for it.

The writing is solid and as I said, the plot moves rapidly, making it a good choice for reluctant readers.  There is not much time spent on character development, but it is not neglected, either.  It simply builds naturally on what has already been established in the first book, with a couple of new characters thrown in.  Don’t go in expecting any answers.  “The Scorch Trials” brings nothing but more questions, but it does so in a way that left me eager to find out what is going on, as opposed to frustrated that too much was happening.

A solid read, and I am looking forward to seeing where it all leads.

 

Content Warning:

Language, Violence